Welcome to my blog, I am a student at Blaketown School in Greymouth, NZ.
Kia Ora Billy,Billy I next time you need to make sure that you use capital letters at the start of your sentence and check your spelling with a buddy as well. Another thing you should do is add more information and punctuation!Nikau
Another thing I would like to add what is Shantey Town and where is it. Also maybe you could tell what your friends name is!From Nikau
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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Kia Ora Billy,
ReplyDeleteBilly I next time you need to make sure that you use capital letters at the start of your sentence and check your spelling with a buddy as well. Another thing you should do is add more information and punctuation!
Nikau
Another thing I would like to add what is Shantey Town and where is it. Also maybe you could tell what your friends name is!
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thank you for the good blog comet nikay
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