Friday, 8 June 2018

Tough times

A struggled at making a wooden tank at my Mum's I tried about 9 time's it did not work it was fun but still did not work.
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous6 August 2018 at 14:01



    Hi Billy
    Billy I liked the way you have added interesting information to your tough time story.
    Did you think about putting full stops in the story.
    Next time, you could make you story a bit longer.
    From
    Josefa:)

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.

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